Nick Against The Mole People Revised

Okay this is some of the revised script for Nick Against The Mole People, check it:

Main Characters:
*Nick The Argonaut- Nick McAleer
*Hara The Haughty Princess - Alisa Arenz
*Lolly The Dwarfed Giant - John Moilien
*Consuela The Gypsy Woman - Kat McAleer
*Captain Ramirez - John Moilien
*King Mole
*Danny Boy

Main Points:
-Musical
-Dance
-Love Story


Opening Scene: Captain Ramirez sailing out at sea. He is using a telescope or binoculars. The sea is gently rocking the small vessel. His first mate Danny Boy walks up and says:

Danny Boy "Any sign of him yet, Captain?"
Captain Ramirez "No Danny Boy, this Radioactive Giant Squid still evades me."
Danny Boy "Captain! Is that an inkblot over there? In the water! Look!"

The Captain still looks fervously through the binoculars in search of the inkspot. Danny Boy tries to point it out before tearing the binoculars away and showing him. Ramirez looks quizzically and then says:

Captain Ramirez "No Danny, that's no inkspot... That's a man!"

The Captain runs over to the side of the ship and looks down with his hands on the side

Captain Ramirez "Nets! Get the nets!"

Two unnamed sailors rush out with a net between them. Ramirez steps out of the way as the sailors cast the net into the briny sea. They shout "Heave! Ho!" As they lift the foreign object on the boat.

The sailors dump the net on the deck. A man in a silver jumpsuit, covered in sea weed falls out. The Captain says:

Captain Ramirez "Danny! Save that poor bastard! I'll not have a man die on my ship!"

Danny begins to pound the man's chest with one clenched fist. The man suddenly wakes up spewing water and coughing.

Nick, (Groggy) "Where am I?"
Captain Ramirez "Your on the good ship Luther, song. Your okay now."

Nick wearily tries to get up, but slumps back down onto the deck of the ship.

Captain "Hold there lad, the Weeping Sea still has her breath in yee."

The Captain grabs a fife from a nearby table and shoves it into Danny Boy's hands. Danny fumbles with the fife and holds it the wrong way, before the Captain corrects him.

Captain "Here son, let us play you an old sailing song, it might make you feel better."

They begin to play Sea Ghost by The Unicorns.

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Intro (Fife) by Danny Boy
Key:
Captain *
Danny X
Both O

* I dove into that freezing sea
* With a parasite attached to me
* I hoped the salt below
* Would divorce what was wed above

* But league after league
* It yet remained
* For the fleshy vessel I
* Kept it sustained

O Buh Buh Buh Buh Buh - Whole crew singing

* So we froze (repeat) X
* Awhile (repeat) X

O Surrounded by one big tear
O Which only reminded me
* Of a former home

O But we weren't welcome
* The sea made that clear
* By filling us with saline
* And sailing us blue blue back into
* The atmosphere - Close up on Ramirez's mouth

* You choked as you surfaced - Looks at Nick, still lying on the deck, covered in sea weed.
* Tangled, In sea weed - He marches on
* But what remained
* Of the driving intent
* That lead me to tract
* Such watery depths
* Many things have betrayed me - Pulls knife out of wall
* Between there and here - Goes to Captain's quarters and pulls out Captain's Log
* And my memory is so fucking unclear

* Who was I with?
* What time was it?
* And where, where did you go? - Pan up to where the Captain is looking on the wall, it
is a picture of him holding hands with the Radioactive
Giant Squid.

1st Scene: The Captain, Danny Boy, and Nick The Argonaut stand on the deck of the good ship Luther, looking out to sea.



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This is all that I have so far. I think that I will write the part for the heroes meeting Consuela, The Gypsy woman next. I have other scenes planned out, I just have to write the events that connect them.